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    L. Noctis

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    Post by Prince L. Noctis Thu Mar 21, 2013 12:51 pm

    Character Sheet

    Name: L. Noctis

    Age: 22

    Rank: Jounin

    Village: Konohagakure

    Appearance:
    Spoiler:

    History: Born into a rich family which was masterfull with swords Noctis was one of many who were able to control the swords with their minds, he was a serious person from birth and doesn't like fighting girl, but if he has to he will. He is the sole survivor of his family and got all of their swords (thus giving him seven) he went to the academy and learned many moves along the way. he became a genin and worked with another three people, the two genins in his team hated hime due to him being serious all the time, during the chunin exams he was forced to use his swords and was defeated because he didn't go all out. Two years passed and he did the chuunin exeams again. He defeated his first opponent in a blink of an eye and was given the rank of chuunin. During his time as chuunin he went on solo missions and was well known for his assassinations. He was feared by most ninja but then again he hardly spoke to any of them. He was then put into the Jounin exams, firtsly he had too lead a team of genin for a whole week, which he did with success but only completed 3 out of the 6 missions, he then was put to an even greater test when he had to infiltrate a village and find out valuable information about an attack on konoha, he managed to get out of there alive by jumping out of a window and just grabing hold of the ledge of the building opposite and escaping all to find out that inside the scroll was a you pass written in it.

    Personality: He is very silent due to his whole family being murdered during his childhood, he doesn't speak to people due to him not trusting people enough to converse whith him and also no one would want to speak to an assassin. he normaly gives people a strong glare that scares even the thoughest ninja.

    Spoiler:

    Jutsus: https://naruto-new-age.rpg-board.net/t33-sword-control-noctis-clan

    Weapons: https://naruto-new-age.rpg-board.net/t34-fusion-swords#43

    Goals: To Become the Strongest of the strong.


    Last edited by Prince L. Noctis on Thu Mar 21, 2013 2:01 pm; edited 3 times in total
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    Post by FrozenChakra Thu Mar 21, 2013 1:15 pm

    First off.
    I need you to increase the personality. Make it about 4-5 lines.

    About history, you cannot skip a rank. Meaning you can't skip from chunin to jounin. State how he got jounin another way. Other then thate

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    Prince L. Noctis
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    Post by Prince L. Noctis Thu Mar 21, 2013 1:34 pm

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    Post by Prince L. Noctis Thu Mar 21, 2013 2:02 pm

    Bump
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    Post by Admin-Kage Thu Mar 21, 2013 2:11 pm

    approved
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    Post by Сobdogred Fri Mar 22, 2013 12:23 am

    Nope, he said four to five lines not sentences. Approval still pending.

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